Topic: Five key ways to fix a bad sentence

Just as with clear writing, fixing up bad writing relies on some basic techniques. Businesses, government departments and other groups produce dense, wordy information every day.

By deconstructing their clumsy sentences, Tessa exposes some of the building blocks in the wall of words. Learn how to spot the culprits, from false subjects to sneaky passives. You can do some quick exercises, and you’re welcome to bring your own examples.
 

About the presenter

Tessa Copland is a highly experienced editor, writer and web consultant. She recently returned to New Zealand after 10 years in Sydney.

When

Monday 31 October

Networking (light refreshments provided) from: 5:30pm

Presentation: 6:00-6:45pm (approximately)

Discussion: 6:45-7:30pm

Cost

There is an entrance fee of $10 to cover the cost of catering.

Please pay cash at the door.

RSVP

To assist with numbers for catering, please let us know if you will be attending the session by contacting Steve Moss.

Where

Auckland Regional Migrant Services
Three Kings Plaza
532 Mt Albert Rd
Mt. Roskill
Auckland

Public parking available directly outside.

The Migrant Services centre is in the main shopping mall at Three Kings. The quickest way to Migrant Services is from the entrance into the mall from the road that runs past the mall towards the Fickling Centre and Library. Public parking is available directly outside in the mall carpark.